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There are 3 words I wished
I could have whispered in your ears.

Just 3 words.
Yet they are so powerful that they could
Make the mightiest man cry.

As much as I would have wanted to say them,
I couldn’t.
I didn’t know how.
Too awkward, I suppose.

Many have tried
And it ruined their connections.

So I kept it in.

To hold on
To what we already had.
Fragmented memories,
Of tears & Laughter.

I didn’t want to let go of that.


I was too afraid,
To make things worse than they were.

But today,
Ah yes, today,
I will break that silence.

Before I die,
I want to tell you,
I hate you.



Bitch.
I still love you though. You can hate & love at the same time...ask Ne-yo.

Just a fun poem I wrote. Haha

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:iconhong-kong-kitty:
Hong-Kong-Kitty Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
OMG this probably sounds redundant but this is so funny XXDD
I should say this to people lol :D
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DylanSeto Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2014  Student Artist
I'm glad you enjoyed this :P

Maybe you should! Haha
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:iconhong-kong-kitty:
Hong-Kong-Kitty Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
If i find it necessary, I'm definitely saying this to someone XD
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DylanSeto Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Student Artist
pfffft who needs a reason to do something?
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pervisage Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Student Writer
Each time I look into a desert, I am reminded of you mon cher.
Not because of the gorgeous sunsets I've seen,
Not because of the glorious pyramids that were built thousands of years ago,
No, for the reason I am reminded of you mon cher is quite simple really.
I always see camels, and their faces are similar to yours.
Chienne
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:icondylanseto:
DylanSeto Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Student Artist
what? lol
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:iconsesamefruit:
SesameFruit Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
AHHAAH This is epic , Your awesome lmfao!<3
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:icondylanseto:
DylanSeto Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013  Student Artist
So I've been told.
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:iconorientalarc:
OrientalArc Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013  Hobbyist Interface Designer
coming of out deep silence, the word oozes tremendous love.... !
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:icondylanseto:
DylanSeto Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013  Student Artist
I'm trying desperately to comprehend this...
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:iconofficialygold:
OfficialYGold Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ahaha!! Oh my god, dude! You are awesome! 
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:icondylanseto:
DylanSeto Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013  Student Artist
I know. 


...Just kidding. :p
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:iconofficialygold:
OfficialYGold Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
No man, there's nothing wrong with knowing that ;) 
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:icondylanseto:
DylanSeto Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013  Student Artist
kekeke ^^"
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:iconalexyorim:
alexyorim Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I thought you'd say "I love potatoes"...
Like me.  :iconfosterscheeseplz:
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:icondylanseto:
DylanSeto Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013  Student Artist
I love potatoes.
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:iconalexyorim:
alexyorim Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I love chocolate milk.
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:icondylanseto:
DylanSeto Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013  Student Artist
i love chocalate.
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:iconthesharpestpoems:
thesharpestpoems Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2013
well this was pleasant the fact that im gonna get yelled at for waking up the whole house laughing is not but oh well F.I.S.H
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:icondylanseto:
DylanSeto Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2013  Student Artist
shit happens...:p

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:iconthesharpestpoems:
thesharpestpoems Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013
excatly
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:icondylanseto:
DylanSeto Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013  Student Artist
:p
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:iconmyrethy:
Myrethy Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Ah, I did not expect the last stanzas at all... I am happily surprised, I like little bits of uniqueness like this...
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:icondylanseto:
DylanSeto Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2013  Student Artist
It helps to have ADD sometimes...XD
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:icon27freegal:
27FreeGal Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013
This is soo awesome!!! :D Really cool!!!! Absolutely love it!!!
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:icondylanseto:
DylanSeto Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013  Student Artist
THANK YOU!!!!! :D
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:icongreenpencilbag:
greenpencilbag Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh my god Yes HA!
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:icondylanseto:
DylanSeto Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013  Student Artist
ERMAGAWD...thank you? Haha
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Undomiel321 Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
haha! Very nice.
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:icondylanseto:
DylanSeto Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013  Student Artist
Thank you ^^
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sketch7778 Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Roflol! When you submitted it to #BeginnersUnite and #EverythingOriginal, the title caught my attention so I was curious. I expected it to be "I love you". When I got to the end of it I couldn't help but laugh. Good 1!
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:icondylanseto:
DylanSeto Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013  Student Artist
Thanks!! xD And yeah, that was kind of the idea behind the piece Haha. That's how midnight poetry goes. Haha
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sketch7778 Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol, loved it :giggle:
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DylanSeto Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2013  Student Artist
lol again....Thanks :P
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:iconsketch7778:
sketch7778 Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome :D
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DylanSeto Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013  Student Artist
^^
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:iconrainslash:
Rainslash Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Same lol
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thatturtlegirl319 Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Mmm love the twist. Ebil Laugh 
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DylanSeto Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013  Student Artist
Mmmm love this comment. :love: 
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thatturtlegirl319 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
lol! :smile: 
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:iconkitsunemimichan:
kitsunemimichan Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
lol i thought it was gonna be i love you, nope. xD
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:icondylanseto:
DylanSeto Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013  Student Artist
You can love & hate at the same time doe. 
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:iconiridescentcatalyst:
IridescentCatalyst Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013
Aw, wow! I thought I knew what this poem was going to be about from reading the title, but I guessed I'm wrong.
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:icondylanseto:
DylanSeto Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013  Student Artist
My job here is done :3
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IridescentCatalyst Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013
Yes, it is. Great poem!
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DylanSeto Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013  Student Artist
Thanks!!
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62nh Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013
I love it!
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:icondylanseto:
DylanSeto Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013  Student Artist
Thank you!!
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:iconninjaskillz99:
NinjaSkillz99 Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013  Student General Artist
I prepared myself for some messed up feels, and then that ending had me in tears :XD:
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DylanSeto Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013  Student Artist
Laugh away yo sorrow! ^__^'
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